I Dreamt Our Love

I can't wait to know you

Hop Scotch Sundays

And denim skirts

Sipping on ice cream floats...

I dreamt a love note,

Once...

Written on stationary

Cream with light pink roses

Folded every so neatly

Tucked in your suit pocket

Waiting for you to find...

While you work

I called while smiling

Wearing nothing but a teddy

Gracing the body that longs

To match your every curve

A living testimonial

To the wonderment of you

Sitting on a porch swing

While your head comforts

Warm thighs

Melt under you

Gravity becomes our friend

As I bite my lip

And take you in

We sip on Riesling

And taste lips

But you are my favorite drink

On dress down Saturdays

When my two pony tails

Beckon your pull

And you make me your prize

Changing your plans with your friends

To rest in my eyes

And my world is yours

And yours is mine

Somehow these days meld into one

But a lifetime only takes a second

Each one a blessing with you

As you write a dream in me

Very specific

Each digit reciting your name

I find in you a poem

Never ending

On dance night Fridays

You take me to the back of the club

And make feel most beautiful of all

Whispering in my ear

I am the luckiest man in the world

Kisses so sweet on my lobes

I reply I can't wait till we get home

And we don't

As on the side of the road

We become 18 again

Writing our names on foggy windshields

And I thank God He made you my husband

Because Manic Mondays are great

As I surprise you for lunch

And I am your treat

And your desk the plate in which you eat

All of me melting into puddles

That give you a facial

And on laundry Tuesday

We wrestle under fresh clean sheets

Sprinkled with lavender

And you Promise your heart again

As you tickle me till I scream please

And love making follows us

Each touch

No matter what or where

Is greater

I found you in my soul

Waiting patiently

To love me

And we grow daily

Becoming more in love

Even before we ever touched

Even before we ever met

I dreamt our love note

 

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

This is beautiful
i am really learning to love your writing, you have a very creative way you search throughout your soul in your writing.
My only suggestion would be to break the piece up a little in a structural way to make the read easier on the eyes
don't change a word though,
It is perfect as it stands
thank you for entering my contest

[Nicholas Hallows]

Hop Scotch Sundays
And denim skirts
Sipping on ice cream floats...
I dreamt a love note,

I love these lines. They create a a beautiful tone to this poem. Beautiful words too. I am grateful to Elii for sharing this with me.

Becoming more in love
Even before we ever touched
Even before we ever met
I dreamt our love note

I can really relate to these lines too. Great write.

[ELii]

An Ode to love, such a beautiful poem. Being in love is an awesome thing, and to keep growing is even better. Your words kept me reading on. the poem flowed very nicely. Awesome!

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Please publish. Please?

I need me a copy of what you've got to say. Word.