Embracing Goodbye

Embracing Goodbye

A Poem by Choosing Life

 

Rivers of salty waters flow,
Broken and cracked is smile
A million ways to goodbye
We missed hello by miles.
I look away as my heart is broken
I guess it is okay for me to be left hoping
No where to go but to moving on
No one to hold now that you’re gone
A million tears have graced this face
So many hurts that can't be erased
Many rivers of brokenness to cross
Many shores of loves that I lost
Hope remains my closest friend
As I lose my heart once again
Bitterness tries to drown you out
Loving you has left me fighting doubt
Peace is here within my soul
It is never easy letting go
I love you beyond this pain
Bitterness can’t survive where love remains
Each tasted tear has proved to be sweet
For I refuse to give into deceit
My mind can not make me build up walls
For it is time for the all of the old ones to fall
Hurt comes and then there is healing
Time stands still for A TIME OF REVEALING
A Better me I shall be
Even as I embrace goodbye
I still believe in love for me
Loving me enough to set you free

© 2008 Choosing Life


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First off, your title peaked my interest.

Then these two lines grabbed my attention.
"Bitterness tries to drown you out"
"Bitterness can't survive where love remains"
So often we want to forget someone, but our hearts won't let us.

But the part that did it for me was the closing.
"Even as I embrace goodbye
I still believe in love for me
Loving me enough to set you free"
This is what love is all about. Not trying to possess that which we love, because that would destroy any love.

Thank you.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

First off, your title peaked my interest.

Then these two lines grabbed my attention.
"Bitterness tries to drown you out"
"Bitterness can't survive where love remains"
So often we want to forget someone, but our hearts won't let us.

But the part that did it for me was the closing.
"Even as I embrace goodbye
I still believe in love for me
Loving me enough to set you free"
This is what love is all about. Not trying to possess that which we love, because that would destroy any love.

Thank you.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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