Under Bridges

You pulled apart my veins

Selfish,chic, and tamed

Just to see I'm hiding

Noting all the grotesque details

Blood onto her veil

Sleeping under bridges

Reviews

[Snuggles McClintock]

i dig it, only I think it stands to be fleshed out, from raw emotion into a substantial piece of narrative

[Miles Evens]

I like this man
I can tell you put some raw emotion into it