I

it all depends on how u look at the world

i got lost in the

            struggle of life

chasin someone else's

                                    dream

then 1 day i woke up

       success

            can only be measured

                     in what matters to you

i painted a canvas

            of lost loves

                  shared dreams

and broken dreams

i thought I could fly

                      and learned to swim

i thought i drowned

                 and learned to fly

i thought i was in love

                    and learned i was trapped

some turn to this

            + some to that

i believe i will

             have another drink

          

 

Reviews

[HoorayForUnderdog]

I can relate to this one, G...well done!!

[emmajoy]

Clever construction and format... interested swing of words ' i thought I could fly

and learned to swim

i thought i drowned

and learned to fly '

Your mind meanders a different path from most.

(are we supposed to use 'one' for 1 and plus for + when we're writing, I use the word we politely!)?