seemingly dark

i look into your eyes and all i see is love but then i look again and it is seemingly dark to the point that i am scared to be hurt again i know you feel the same but i know what you have been through i will never hurt you my heart is in your hands and it may be in pieces and it may be seemingly dark but i hope you can put it back together and it will always be yours no mater if we are seemingly dark.

Reviews

[the happiest demon in t..]

it great baby i feel the same

[Floornine]

Nice repetition! I think some line breaks would do this piece good; right now it's a little fast and it would be nice to slow it down in order to savor the repetition and the role it play.