Questions I seek To...

Alot of things has been in my mind so i decided to make this poem or story. Its just based on what i keep on thinking.

Why cant dreams come true

It would always stay the same 

Why cant life just change for once?

Why cant I just move on?

Why I keep feeling like this?

Im feeling confused

My head is spinning, spinning and spinning

Its making me confused

Mixed with words 

Whats with this?

Why cant I just stop day dreaming?

Why am I locked in the world of dreams..?

When can I stop day dreaming?

When will I notice that dreams wont ever come true?

Why cant I stop seeking the answers to the questions I think of?

Why i feel like im trapped.

Whats with my mind?

Its mixed up

Its all mixed with words of love

Now random words

Why cant this stop?

It keeps going on and on.

Why cant it end?
An endless cycle thats going on in my mind.

Why do I keep thinking on romance

Why do the words I say are none sense?

When can I get out of this, when can I stop myself?

When will I cut this dream apart?

Why cant I be answered? 

When can all of this non sense be gone?

When will my wish come true?

How can I stop it?

When will all of this stop? When will I finally seek the answers to my questions? When will i stop day dreaming? 

When will all of these questions will be answered...?

Author's Note

Idk if the pic was rite for this poem

Reviews

[Nick Arouet]

I like your word choice in a lot of spots, like "cut this dream apart" and "Thinking on romance", but I suggest that you use proper grammar in order to keep your audience from getting distracted. Capitalize and spell words out like 'can't', etc. Besides that, I really like this poem. And the last part should be rephrased to, 'When will all of these questions be answered?' I really think that the constant question rhythm is appealing, though, and that you put a lot of thought into your word placement and questions. Good work!

[Yuhai_Yuki]

thnx, im not really good at making poems its just for my homework for english. xD