in heat

sometimes - i just burn up with the desire to change - it hurts

the sun is in my mind

and i'm burning up

with this empty dry burn

of desire

to be better

to lay down with my thoughts of me

and intertwine them with my potential

my talents

and my gifts

snow on the ground

winter all around

and i'm in heat

burning

awaiting my relief

someone save me

please

from me

Reviews

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This was a clever combination of allusion to different elements of your personality. Combined with the metaphorical reference to being "in heat" you paired up your more grounded sentiments with simile. A very unique approach, and one that really pays off in the end product. I've actually never seen that before and applaud your very unique style.