God has been kidnappd

So many pieces hacked from the whole...

 

God has been kidnapped

hijacked

stolen

torn to shreds

wholly broken

re-packaged in bite site

little parcels

snippets of god in digestible globules

each a little different

from the other

as worshippers worship each one with wonder

seeing only what each perceives

IS the whole in their make-believe

creation story that can never be

the whole

the truth

of our eternity

for bits of the whole are as a body dis-membered

each part a memory of before it was severed

from the whole that pulsed forth life

from the whole before the divide

from the whole that would never deem

any of its parts

unworthy

Reviews

[Robert Francis Callaci]

Amen Amen Amen- The unvweaving of the weave- You write with a passion and a underlying anger that is thrilling- this is a fast paced ring of raw truth- We latch on to bits and pieces of filtered truth and cut ourselves off from the unfiltered wholeness that is right in front of our unseeing eyes. - A powerpacked peice.

This is also a well paced and rhymed poem- rat tat tat-great poetry-


my warmest
bob

[BWOz]

This is a good "rant" style poem. Back in the beatnik days rant poetry was the predominant style. I normally don't read rants as many seem to be aimed at specific person, but this takes on a current cultural trend. It doesn't matter what your religious beliefs are, I think the point is that there seem to be a lot of people who feel it is their responsibility to tell the rest of us what to believe, how to act, what to say...nice work.
B

[FR Toscano]

Well f**k. Wish I'd written this!

Trying to play catch up before I nod off.

[Kelley]

That was an amazing write....smiles
I would never of thought of that way.
Bit size pieces .....hummmmm


Great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Tina my love...your muse is working overtime. Is it because you've left a world of chaos and discontent to find a safe haven where you are loved and appreciated, that you write with the abandon that is evident here?

You judt keep getting better and better!

Love ya,
Bea