Hush...

A love affair with words

Seduce me with your words,
verbs draped across my breasts,
suggest...
anything.
Just suggest.

Murmur meanderings into my neck.
Wreck mediocrity with a subtext,
hex spells upon me
free spirit with prose,
expose tongue twisters to my toes,
so I can feel your wet wordy lap
tap ten digital code rap.
Sap soaked in your graffiti,
defeat me, shout out
doubt me with your mouth.
Make me from your song.

Long longing ,
belonging near,
where I can hear,
sheer seduction as you satiate.
Wait...-
please.
Just wait.

Tense, thriller panting,
chanting rhythmic rhymes dancing,
entrancing passion advancing,
chancing whispers light breeze,
tease lips atop lips as they move,
smooth over eachother,
smother the world outside,
slide into the library of us,
...Hush.
 

Reviews

[Viper9]

Damn, Tina! What a hot, sensual, titillating poem this is. Oh, how pleased I would be if people reacted to words (My words? Any words?) in this way.

Love the staccato bit especially:

"so I can feel your wet wordy lap
tap ten digital code rap.
Sap soaked in your graffiti,"

Great to read your work again. :)

[Ivor]

Tina,

Afloat on your river of dreams, hope the shearpin doesn't snap again!

Ivor

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Tina my luv...you've outdone yourself on this one!!!!
I can't imagine how Shakespeare ever found the time to write anything...he must have been so busy seducing the female population with his flowery prose!

Just look what it did for Cyrano!!!!

love ya,
Bea

[Robert Francis Callaci]

Tinalouise

It's always a delight to read your poems I've known about writer's cafe for years but was to involved with running Lit to join. That no longer being the case this Cafe seems like a lovely home- Us lit refugees need to stick together:)


my warmest
bob

[Liam Riley]

I like the expansive vocabulary, and the description of the words have the ability to seduce. Very well written, Great poem

[Frank F. Atanacio]

I like this love affair with words very clever :)