Fingers Crossed

my first poem on here. nothing special, just a very little intro to me.

I have no inspiration, no passion and no spirit

Laziness is a disease, a virus. i can kill it 

But whats the point in trying, or writing down these lines

I doubt anyone will read them, no one ever takes the time

To hear me through my true voice, that i often hide away

I have the talent i know it, so it wont be like that one day

Until that day arrives, ill keep working on my skill

My dream is to one day make it, and i know someday i will 

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. Yes. Yes. That is kinda how I feel. Nice

[SuddenCognito]

This is really fantastic! A great first submission. The rhymes are well placed and fit in effortlessly. With a little bit of tidying up the formatting, it will read easier and look complete. :)