Goodbye, For Now

Goodbye, For Now

A Poem by tim.reed
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Prose Poetry

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In that last moment, when frailty begets clarity, what is truth becomes true for the first time and only. Senses fail, and the flesh betrays, but the heart of all things beats. We dance in the futile, grasping to the real, longing for all the shimmers.

© 2017 tim.reed


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BBP
You have a way with spitting truth but keeping it polished in such a small package.

Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


tim.reed

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I enjoy your feedback.
"for the first time and only time"
this line is a bit awkward for me, maybe for the first and only time might work; unless u mean to repeat the word time for purpose of tone.
nonetheless another great write, i like your style of prose, you have a unique voice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


tim.reed

7 Years Ago

I did mean to repeat, but not for tone. I wanted to slow down the ready to enhance the finality of i.. read more
Very descriptive. I really liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


tim.reed

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺
These short few lines conveys the bond so beautifully...lovely use of words..

Posted 7 Years Ago


tim.reed

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Can I get some feedback on my poems? I would be happy to reciprocate!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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