I can't make up my mind is this sad because she lost her children to the streets they where victims of violence? Or is it sad because they have moved on with their life and she just feels like nothing without them? Either way my friend it's sad, make me want to cry for her... :(
Truman says it does not deal with nature but that depends on how you look at it. One day all of the earths children will be gone. Every living thing on it will parish to give life to a new beginning, all her children will return...! Awesome write my friend...!
I wouldn't know the difference between a Haiku or a Senryu but I will look it up. I have so much to learn about poetry; but I don't have to go to school to discover that which moves me, and this piece does just that. As a mother, the fact that her children are gone totally explains the line, "One life, tormented." Moving...
Sorry about the long delay in getting to your read request, but I have been away from the cafe' for a long time.
Always due to follow signs. This was short, and I could quickly tear away the tone, feelings, emotions, everything. That takes much talent. It makes the reader question so many things. I like it.
so short... but it leaves me asking so many questions!! A mother left by her children whether by death or choice really "...just aint right" Good write:)
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