Beautiful Sunset

Bittersweet farewells. Find the joy in every goodbye.

Beautiful Sunset

 

 

 

A beautiful sunset

What a beautiful sunset

 

Ignore all your sorrows

hold back your tears

your soul may despair

but it's a beautiful sunset

 

do not fear the ends

the pain of farewell

try to take in

this beautiful sunset

 

our life is like earth

going through its seasons

moving on its own terms

to its beautiful sunset

 

although it may seem so

it never happens too soon

things always will end

at their beautiful sunset

 

what a glorious day

so hard to let go

but just try to enjoy

this beautiful sunset

 

sunrise

Author's Note

So this is my second shot at poetry and I think it is, somehow, worse than my first. Regression!
Anyways here it is! have at it! advice is welcome :)

Reviews

[Kevin Horsley]

I did prefer your first poem, but this is not bad.
Repetition of a phrase adds strength to a poem and this is no exception.
Some small spelling errors - last stanza - glorious for example.

Again, flows fairly well. With a little more time the kinks can be ironed out.

[Kiari Sabon]

luv this

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Regression No more like Progression. I liked this more than your first try but thats just me. This poem has good flow good imagery made me feel calm like everything was going to be ok

[~Lizzy♬]

This poem was actually better than your first one, in my opinion. I could imagine the sunrise in my mind as I read this. The description and beauty of the words in each stanza was very pure and soft. I loved how you ended with the wore sunrise; it was a unique idea.

Again, sorry if this isn't a good review... I'm not good at reviewing...

~Lizzard~

[Naomi Roseღ]

This was beautiful, not bad AT ALL. I could imagine the scene you described in this poem perfectly. Wonderful write :) 100/100

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sweet motivational poetic song~ how right you are~

[SparksLC]

This is really good! =) It definitely represents that the grass is always greener on the other side. It's a very encouraging poem! Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I could see the beauty of a sunset with your description and story in your words. The sunset is the best time of a day. Allowing night to take over and change the feel of the moment. A excellent poem.
Coyote