buzz

poem about a girl

The tickets are bought 
Our arrival is at hand
All of my senses are buzzing
The fresh evening air
The eager expectation
But you in my arms is the most palpable feeling
Your lips
Your eyes
The touch of your hip on my hand.
I tighten and draw you near.
A shine in your eyes tells me you agree.
A wonderful evening has taken place
I'm in love and I have you at my side.

Reviews

[rubie]

I love the title for this piece. "senses are buzzing"....that feeling of electricity when all your nerve endings are tingling, shouting and you feel about to burst from your skin which holds you hostage.

nice write!

[Jo March]

Aww this is really sweet