falling...

falling...

A Poem by timcampbell

there's nothing i can do.
i guess i've really fallen for you.
my recent disposition
has come to your attention
and i hope you like me too.

i hope it's not too obvious.

i don't want things to change
but i want you to see me.
i don't want it to be different
because it doesn't have to be

really.

you can be you
and i can be me
and we'll live
together happily

we can live together
happily

© 2010 timcampbell


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Oooh, I love this!
I love how you spaced this, separating "I hope it's not too obvious" and "really".
And--:
"i don't want things to change
but i want you to see me."
--that's how I feel all the time. Haha.
... actually, this whole poem is. XD

Posted 15 Years Ago


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timcampbell
timcampbell

Mannheim, Germany



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My name's Timothy Campbell and I like to write poetry. I'm 18 years old and I live in Mannheim, Germany. I am a senior at Mannheim High School and graduate in June 2009! Can't wait. more..

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