Yellow

Yellow means life,

Yellow means day,

Yellow means happiness,

It makes me feel ok.

Yellow is the sun and also the stars,

Yellow is that kite or the by-passing cars.

Yellow is bright, what shining it brings,

Half a bee is yellow, the part where it stings.

Yellow is my mood, It dries my tears

I could stare for days, and maybe...

 for years.

Author's Note

Do you think it describes a colour????

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

More than being a color, yellow describes your mood. Your choice of words is brilliant and just as captivating. Now you inspired me into writing a new poem. Thanks for sharing this one. ;) Simply lovely and a fun to read.

[georgie.porgie.13]

yep.
sure does tilda. it's a really good poem.
WELL DONE!

[Daytonight]

I love the part about the bee being yellow where it stings! Great work!

[Reviews]

It's very childish in it's simplicity without any sense of depth or meaning to it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the description of the color yellow. After I thought a second. I agree with your words. Yellow is a good color. (Except for cars and houses) A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[frozensakura]

this is great, i love it.
yeah i do think it describes the colour well.