Imagine

What do you think?

The things I imagine,

The things in my brain,

Are all a bit silly,

But I think them all the same.

Sometimes it's raining,

Sometimes it's sunny,

Sometimes it's sad

And sometimes it's funny.

One week I'm a superhero,

One week I'm a cat,

One day I'm a winner,

One day I'm a hat.

So you see,

I imagine things,

That only I know,

Because sometimes I'm the bread,

And sometimes I'm just the dough.

 

 

Author's Note

I really enjoyed writing this poem so I hope you enjoy reading it. I would like to be rated so I can see what I can improve in.

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

I was really impressed with this write tilda. It had a great rhythm and cadence to it that made it light and airy and just plain fun to read. You summed it up perfectly:
"sometimes I'm the bread,
And sometimes I'm just the dough.
Pretty profound thought and insight
Good work tilda
allen
If you aren't familiar with "Imagine" by John Lennon, you should download it or at least listen to it, asap.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Wow! Really good :D Excellent flow and rhyme, very imaginiative! I really enjoyed reading it!

[Uc Amalu Jr]

yea, you really do imagine things. . Lol

[Becky C Strukamp]

A charming poem.

[light and ashes]

This reminds me of Doctor Seuss. I love Doctor Seuss. Also I love the last lines: "Because sometimes I'm the bread, and sometimes I'm just the dough." What a wonderful metaphor. This is awesome.

[Stormy Weather]

:) Imagination is great, and having a wild one makes for a great writer! Keep imagining on! haha. Lovely poem.

[Maya Storm]

Well it was fun to read
You made me smile :)

[∂αʌ<..]

i did enjoy reading it..your rhythmic pattern is amazing!
smoooth and nice flow....and i found myself transported back in time!
beautiful!
^.^