I will now agree that the answer to our questions are only deep inside. I remember Johari's Windows. Maybe there are times that you know something that others don't know; or you don't know something that other's know; or you both know; or you both don't know.
We just need time to reflect...
Thanks for sharing.
Yes I think this work has some potential. "Shatter the rock before it reaches the glass" is really powerful. I would keep tweaking this as time passes. This could be your finest work to date!
simple, yet profound. some of my favourite poems are about self-reflection, and I think you've done a great job bringing this piece together from beginning to end. I think maybe if it was structured into stanzas, it might be more fluent, but that's just my opinion. very nicely done!
Interesting work..Good topic..Yes, our character is deep within..It can be developed for good or not..Enjoyed reading this morn..When one wants to develop for the good there are mountains and valleys...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sunflower/Sara
I love how you move us all to consider looking deeper inside... the thoughts and reflections of a life not merely lived, but pondered with a purpose... We need to see this more...
This speaks so much honesty...I like your insight in this poem...
"Let us not tread shallow water
For fear we may drown"
Those lines were powerful, even the ending...
Great work!
:)))