Reflecting

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Reflecting   Deep is the core of inner character That we have yet to meet And sometimes we elude it Is it for some reason or forgotten lore? That we choose to remember never more Let us not tread the shallow water For fear we may drown In the facade of outer surroundings when we place our feet on hollow ground Let us not stand the inner structure Where the foundation should be Shatter the rock first before it reaches the glass For the reflection you see Comes from within By Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

Lot of times the answer we seek are deep inside please let me know what you think good or bad all is accepted thank you

Reviews

[Dhaye]

I will now agree that the answer to our questions are only deep inside. I remember Johari's Windows. Maybe there are times that you know something that others don't know; or you don't know something that other's know; or you both know; or you both don't know.
We just need time to reflect...
Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Great wisdom and thoughts shared.
"Shatter the rock first
before it reaches the glass
For the reflection you see
Comes from within"
The above lines are very true. Hidden demons can destroy a life. We must know forgiveness of self and others. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful, nothing more to it. Your words ring true.

[Seashell]

this is written in such an easy way to both read and comprehend and I agree with all contents.... sometimes we are a different person inside and either cannot or will not let this side show for various reasons....We either find and embrace or hide and ignore...
very well written
thanks for share x

[once upon a time]

Very good! Really enjoyed reading it!

[Frieda P]

Strange I was just now thinking along the same line of your thoughts, even wrote something in the same realm of contemplation. Very complex, yet simple this message. Much enjoyed Mauricio...

[Brenda]

I enjoyed that very much...especially as one who likes to reflect...your words struck a chord with me...very well said!!!

[jdr / Jennifer]

Eloquently written- like a breath of fresh air

[Ruth]

We as humans, have forgotten that we are incredibly spiritual...our intuition could flourish should we allow it! Powerful thinking :)