Spiritual awaken

something that came to mind

Spiritual Awaken

 

I look, I see

Even when the clouds spread gray

Vision of the sky enter me

I pray

Realizing what I feel

Is all around me

Out in the open, sometimes hidden

Yet I know you’re there

I’ve been lifted to believe

That I can climb those mountains

And pass the clouds

For on that day

I will say, my lord

Now

 I can truly see.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

Author's Note

When I pray I know to whom but I have this habit of looking towards the sky so I wrote this, remember poetry is always open to interpretation so I leave it to the reader.

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Metaphysical, Mystical & Fantastical Poetry of the Arcane

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

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[Anthony M Smith Jr]

HaHo,
Thanks for sharing your words and thoughts. I appreciate the chance to look into other peoples path to enlightenment. Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[WhiteWillow]

This is such an uplifting piece. It soothes and calms, and reminds us that we are all a part of somehting much bigger than ourselves. Beautiful work.

[ForTheWorld]

Praying. Something that can really calm you when you're exhausted, something that can really make you sake, something that can really make you realize I'm lucky enough to have Him in heart for He is always giving me strength.

[Tate Morgan]

One of your best works this transends life and time Well done

[Ron]

Lovely work Mauricio. Something tells me this will be your year. When you buy your private jet fly over to Cambridge Airport in the Uk and we shall have tea. Merry, merry Christmas.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

This reads like that you are reaching out to God..I believe that He is longing for you as much as you seem to be longing for Him..Great work..I enjoy being out on the porch when I can for sunrises..I even enjoy the cloudy days when the fog slowly enshrouds me..I appreciate you stopping by my work..The place that had the Limericks all over the walls sounds like a very interesting place to have a meal with friends..I am glad that my work brought back good memories of place that you had visited..Sunflower/Sara

[Zeek4]

A very tender thought provoking piece Mauricio. Hope all is well with you.

[AHudson]

I like it. It's very nice.

[Robert Malcom]

I have no words to express how I feel towards this...

[roarke]

no interpretations needed. Clearly, spiritual. This piece is definitely a psalm like awakening. Very fine work.