I challenge others, often not myself. To justify what’s right from wrong. A perception perceived from indifference. This resentment I've longed. If a solution is not placed on the table
I’ve been stuck working on this piece for a month, your input is always greatly appreciated,
I’m a member of a club and sometimes people want to impose what they think is right without thinking of others and it happens everywhere
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The first line is gold. How often do we all challenge others and pick out what is wrong with everyone else. We turn the finger on ourselves at times but sometimes not to the same degree and sometimes we are even more harsh with other people. Sigh.. the ability to be understood, a constant quest.
"Oh, the comfort, the inexpressible comfort of feeling safe with a person, having neither to weigh thoughts nor measure words, but pouring them all out, just as they are, chaff and grain together, certain that a faithful hand will take and sift them, keep what is worth keeping, and with a breath of kindness blow the rest away.” -Dinah Craik
I especially like the line "The strongest leaves the last impression"...I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Enjoyed..Very gifted writer...May your gift expand and overflow onto the pages of WritersCafe...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sunflower
I see this piece as one of universal struggle. The way through it is planting the seeds. Yet, it is a long process that many of us don't have the patience to last until the harvest.
Mauricio, I think your piece stands pretty strong as it is. To me the purpose of prose is more the meaning than the form. Your piece has meaning.
Everyone has the right to opinions, but being disrespectful of and indifferent to other people's feelings is insulting. We all need to think twice before speaking, tolerance and empathy are sadly lacking in today's society.
Your thoughts and words are very powerful here. Inspiring poetry.
Strong piece.. and you are right people to speak before they think! I use to be like that but I realized i was hurting a lot of people in the process. So I can relate...