One For All

One For All

First cause,

brought unity,

for the light of the world.

Supreme being,

hence forth wisdom and knowledge.

Our cause,

mercy,

with understanding

The spirit of truth

For all mankind,

To up hold and preserve

The fruits

That give the bread of life.

By Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

Since I’ve been road I had to wine and dine at some of are finest rescue mission which always gives sermon before the meal so after so many versions I came up with this. let me know what you think good or bad.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your words show the man you are, giving and caring, no matter what life throws at you. Like Ron, I wish with all my heart that someone would offer you a place you could call home; you deserve it because trust and hope are always at the forefront of your writing, there's never bitterness only a sincere bright light.

[Desert Dreamer]

Your last lines make me feel strongly that we must protect the earth.

[serpent]

a very touching write...brilliant!

[YouoweYoupay]

Such noble, righteous words. *thumbs up* is what I think. :)

[India Brooks]

From a moving act of pen flowed an excellent piece!

[Art Sun]

Nice work Mauricio...it is when one can evolve with the world, and know there positional character that one can see how life truly is...nice work my friend...

[joe shmo]

Awesome poem so true the fear (meaning reverence and respect honor) of the Lord is the begining of wisdom! keep writing :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Supreme being. I love how you put that. It is more universal than God. This is a great uplifting poem that speaks of devotion in a very creative way. You have penned this well and your thoughts are clearly expressed. Hope you are doing well.

[J.Black]

Back on the road again eh? Well all the very best to you! Since you are quite talented, people must be blind... you will not be put to waste! This was great.

[Marie Harrison]

I think it's brilliant! He gives us the fruits of the holy spirit. I don't know if I remember them all, i remember kindness, grace, joy, love, I can't remember the rest. Great poem.

[Ron]

Mauricio I did not see you were back on the road! This poem (in view of that) is very moving. From the UK I will send you 1000 prayers tonight. Someone give Mauricio a job with a home! I am sure you will not regret it!