I Wonder

I Wonder

 

 

I travel a world I don't know.

As I stand on a rock,

My view,

A vast open sea.

How far must I reach?

To obtain infinity

Day by day,

I've walk across these rocks,

In my view,

 All I can see,

 Is, 

Vast open land,

No matter how close I get,

The distance always seems an eternity

But as night descends I pray for light,

As I lay on the rock I've walk with,

One thing I know for sure.

 My heart will always be home.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

Author's Note

just something I wanted to share I hope you like it.

Reviews

[Shante Payne]

Its crazy how you can be doing the same thing everyday hustling you know and you still dont reach your goals. Some may say that you're never satisfied with life yet its that greed that keeps us going and no matter how far you get, you never forget where you came from (that's just my take on this)...great write, I enjoyed reading

[Stef Outsiders]

beautiful poem so full of meaning... thank you for sharing!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Such Beautiful words love how You Express your spirit
it's fun to see many places But home is where the heart is.

Thank you for sharing God bless lily have a blessed week

[Morgan]

good job!

[The Analog Kid]

The heart is the center of your being. As you travel, you are home. Also, sometimes we're on a viscious treadmill and the horizon keeps moving furher..that's life! Nice short and potent write.

[Desert Dreamer]

I am left feeling that home is everywhere, wherever we are. So much of the world to discover and call home.

[Art Sun]

In the very saddest days...those times when we are at our lowest...and when we realize that infinity and eternity are not here within this world...then we find our home ...

very creative my friend...

enjoyed...

[Marie Harrison]

What a deep and beautiful poem that shows the glitter of your pensive thoughts. It is a stunning poem.

[joe shmo]

true home is where the heart is :) Amen!

[Liza]

our hearts are everything that make us unique in the ways we admire the world and show love to those around us
this was beautiful