Time

never stop moving

Time,

Moving through all dimension,

Ever sending,

Never ending,

Stop watch and you will see.

Time, ever bending,

Always moving, years behind,

Like light it will disappear

Only to reappear, so bright.

Now descending,

Shooting across the sky,

Blinded, by the naked eye.

Time.

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

just somthing I put together on a raining day

Reviews

[Ron]

Like time rolling by when jumping trains, hours of grinding rail stock and dust and danger! Yet it is true we are all pea size in comparison to time who sees us all off in the end. The Earth too! Time will tick by and watch when the sun explodes. All those images implanted by this little poem in the true jaunty Montoya style. Hope the residents of Mauricio's new township see what a gem they have.

[Ruth]

Beautifully crafted love, time is an enemy to most, it would seem! A unique expression of this :)
Wonderful work
xx

[Angel Veselinov]

Yet another great and deep piece full of wise words and explanations. :) Really loved the way you captured time with your pen :P or keyboard. Lovely poem :) Thanks for sharing! 100/100 for this one :) my friend

[Tate Morgan]

We do seem to percieve the time gone by much better than the time to come

[Zeek4]

I loved the topic of your poem. I have always been fascinated by the concept of time. Some of Einstein's writing helps get your head around it to some extent, but it is still such a mystery.

[Art Sun]

Nice work Mauricio...time is that never ending reality of which we wish would never end for us personally...

nice...

[roarke]

The poem has a good feel to it. A good description of time and how we perceive it. Your piece has a positive tone and a cosmic message. No mean feat to accomplish. These are my favorite lines:

"Shoot across the sky,
Blinded, by the naked eye.
Time."

[The Analog Kid]

I like the way you kind of wove in the theory of relativity. Pretty cool.

[Alicia Schroeder]

I love this, great write

[Marie Harrison]

Love this poem Mauricio. It's a very creative and introspective poem.