Those Eyes

 

Those Eyes

Those wonderful eyes have me sinking.

Along with that smile, I can't stop thinking.

I'm at a lost for words, as a sure bet.

cause there isn't enough letters in the alphabet.

yet, no matter how I try.

I can not hide,

Nor forget,

That smile,

Along with those,

beautiful eyes.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

something I wrote for a friend

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Eyes are not just eyes to the soul, they can be windows to a beautiful place out of this world, that is if that person you're gazing at is close to you, and from what I can read, the person described here must be very close, and very special. Simple words, with warm effects. Thanks for sharing.

[Ruth]

lol
This is lovely hon:)
Those eyes sure have got you in a fix lol
Beautiful verse!
xx

[Ron]

This is much more my cup of tea. The confusion I see in the wording of the first half mirrors neatly the knock out blow that sort of smile delivers. That is how it works for me. You may not have meant it so!

[Morning Star]

Mauricio....They say eyes are the window to the soul
An I believe that through the eyes you can see so much beauty
You certainly write these treasures so eloquently
Wishing you lots of Love and Peace and Light

[just rose.]

what a lovely tribute! anyone would be blessed to receive this.

[KatiePie]

This was beautiful, especially because the eyes are the window to the soul. Gorgeous write. Thank you for sharing.

[Art Sun]

nice work...

[The Analog Kid]

Beautiful, short write. Eyes are very telling.

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Wonderfully sweet and heartfelt.

[Lovely Lady]

She should be honored.... to know a poet as you.... and be immortalized not only in your heart but now here forever! Love it!
~♥~

[Marie Harrison]

Those eyes get us all of the time! Beautiful poem.