seasoned

 

Seasoned

 

Sometimes,

 Time will encase those things that will never change.

As clouds expand to spread their tears,

So the sun can bring fourth another day.

I've reminisce these days like a stillborn seed,

So it won't, ever grow.

Only to find when night falls,

All that’s left,

Is for me to rest my soul.

 

Oceans waves’ crash against the cliffs,

While the moonlight breaks through the mist.

I toss and turn a dreary me, awoke, from a dream of a sweet less night.

Now that the fog has settled, should I ponder what lies in wait?

Or place my life and trust in God, as my guiding light.

 

Many trees stand stern from the gust of mighty winds.

Rivers flow down stream upon arriving to an open sea.

As eagles soar through the vast sky in abundant air.

These are the things

The Lord has placed

Around me.

 

Just as the stars above are light years away.

I am no more near to thee,

 so I pray.

I marvel at what lies before me.

As a gift of life,

for all to see.

Amen

 

by Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

Author's Note

just something I wrote while on the road I would appreciate your input good or bad.

Reviews

[Morning Star]

Mauricio i found this beautiful verse very inspiring
it is probably the most beautiful prayer poem i have read
In a long while your words captured the beauty of the
universe the earth and and it also captured your
Beautiful soul!
Kudos!!
Have a great weekend!

[StarryeyedGirl]

this poem it's just so amazing, and beautiful. it's also inspiring to me. awesome work

[nostal]

Beautiful.

[emmajoy]

'Many trees stand stern from the gust of mighty winds. ~ Rivers flow down stream upon arriving to an open sea. ~ As eagles soar through the vast sky in abundant air. ~ These are the things the Lord has placed around me.'

Such wonderful awareness of the world, and that makes your beautiful poem even more aware of the Lord's care. Trust in everything around you, trust in self, trust in God.

This is a deeply felt piece of writing .. one of your best if not the best, lovely phrasing, finely presented.

[Cheryl J. Turner]

This is beautiful, gentle, soft writing.
So wonderful to read.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this poem that is written like a prayer and what a wonderful prayer it is. You have done an amazing job on this write.

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

holds the flow of beauty that still lies in the world

[KatiePie]

This was a very enjoyable read, great write! ^_^

[Marie Harrison]

It is very beautiful. He's guiding you too, everyday.

[Ashley.M.E]

this is really good, a nice peaceful poem. Well done!