Wishful Love

wishful thinking

Wishful Love

 

I’ve come to terms that some things, will never change.

I yearn, I want, but if you don’t, those feelings could never be the same.

I could climb the highest mountain or sink beneath the sea.

Nether, will get me closer, nor bring my heart to thee.

 

My heart goes astray in hopes to keep the memories.

Of Entrapped visions of dreams, that will last an eternity.      

 I humble myself for a love, I thought was true.

For a wishful love, I’ll always think of you.

THE END.

 

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

   

 

Author's Note

There was this girl no matter what I’d do I could never get through even thought the feelings where there.

Reviews

[joe shmo]

I like your poems! keep writing! It is good to write from the heart. My poems come from the heart and from the bible my favorite books Song of Solomon which is the lovers chapter, Psalm the uplifting deliverence prayer song chapters Proverbs the wisdom chapter. And some poems I get through prayer and meditation with Jesus. So glad you like them thank you for the review! I had a lot wishful thinking when it came to lovers but I do know the right one will come when I least expect it. It's hard being single but a blessing at the same time. But it all works out for the good I think God saves the best for last :) It is better to let love awaken on it own if ya try and chase it, it seems to run away Haha!!!

[KatiePie]

You can tell this was heart-felt, because you can feel the emotion. Beautiful piece.

[Fran Marie]

A most beautiful piece with sincere emotions brought forth~ I like it!

[lamia]

so beautiful !! I really enjoyed reading this

[An Ordinary Woman]

absolutely stunning. It's so pretty and honest. I'm confused why it has a low rating. I give it a 100. It deserves more.

[Crossed Sky]

This is the best poem you have ask me to read until now !~~ Great Work

[Cheryl J. Turner]

This is so beautiful. You can tell it's from the heart.

[Liza]

an insightful expression of longing, acceptance and hope between fantasy and reality....

[Ruth]

And its a good something!:) The heart sure os a powerful thing to write from, good poem love

xx

[J.Black]

Well, all things from the heart are real, raw and emotional. This was all of that.