Wishful Love

wishful thinking

Wishful Love

 

I’ve come to terms that some things, will never change.

I yearn, I want, but if you don’t, those feelings could never be the same.

I could climb the highest mountain or sink beneath the sea.

Nether, will get me closer, nor bring my heart to thee.

 

My heart goes astray in hopes to keep the memories.

Of Entrapped visions of dreams, that will last an eternity.      

 I humble myself for a love, I thought was true.

For a wishful love, I’ll always think of you.

THE END.

 

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

   

 

Author's Note

There was this girl no matter what I’d do I could never get through even thought the feelings where there.

Reviews

[joe shmo]

I like your poems! keep writing! It is good to write from the heart. My poems come from the heart and from the bible my favorite books Song of Solomon which is the lovers chapter, Psalm the uplifting deliverence prayer song chapters Proverbs the wisdom chapter. And some poems I get through prayer and meditation with Jesus. So glad you like them thank you for the review! I had a lot wishful thinking when it came to lovers but I do know the right one will come when I least expect it. It's hard being single but a blessing at the same time. But it all works out for the good I think God saves the best for last :) It is better to let love awaken on it own if ya try and chase it, it seems to run away Haha!!!

[chakala]

Really like this one. Very soulful and brings to mind lost love for all of us.

[Phibby Venable]

aah, i hate it when love will not come when it is called,
and called so beautifully in this wonderful, sincere piece.
enjoyed it very much.

[Taylor H.]

I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, loved this. The flow was wonderful and your rhymes were great. Most people cant pull off the Shakespearean successfully :) Great poem

[Ladysue]

Though this is a sad piece, it has tremendous beauty... I enjoyed this...

[Art Sun]

no where is there more to bring forth than from the heart and soul...this is how love grasp the very life we live...

nice work...

[StarryeyedGirl]

a beautiful poem. well written, and your words bring truth of heartache. short yet delicate piece of work

[Emily]

another lovely piece. Hark heartache for it strikes the unknowing and knowing alike. There is no place to hide, no way to build a wall too high for it to breach. It seeks and conquers and never ceases to learn, every entrance to the most protected heart.

Nice work.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

As I read I could feel it is from the heart.
Love is a mystery to me. Loving someone who doesn't love
you in the same way, or possibly not at all is painful.
As you so well expressed, nothing we can do or say will make the love come ..
I enjoyed this though it does leave me with a sad feeling.

Chloe

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is definitely written from a beautiful heart, wonderful piece!

[Mike O'Sean]

Such a sad tale of desire. We've all wanted something that we could never have. I applaud the pure emotion of this poetry. I have nothing to be critical of.