Wishful Love

wishful thinking

Wishful Love

 

I’ve come to terms that some things, will never change.

I yearn, I want, but if you don’t, those feelings could never be the same.

I could climb the highest mountain or sink beneath the sea.

Nether, will get me closer, nor bring my heart to thee.

 

My heart goes astray in hopes to keep the memories.

Of Entrapped visions of dreams, that will last an eternity.      

 I humble myself for a love, I thought was true.

For a wishful love, I’ll always think of you.

THE END.

 

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

   

 

Author's Note

There was this girl no matter what I’d do I could never get through even thought the feelings where there.

Reviews

[joe shmo]

I like your poems! keep writing! It is good to write from the heart. My poems come from the heart and from the bible my favorite books Song of Solomon which is the lovers chapter, Psalm the uplifting deliverence prayer song chapters Proverbs the wisdom chapter. And some poems I get through prayer and meditation with Jesus. So glad you like them thank you for the review! I had a lot wishful thinking when it came to lovers but I do know the right one will come when I least expect it. It's hard being single but a blessing at the same time. But it all works out for the good I think God saves the best for last :) It is better to let love awaken on it own if ya try and chase it, it seems to run away Haha!!!

[J. Marc]

I love this! Indeed, there are some things that do not have a price! THis is absolutely great despite its rough lucidity: I could climb the highest mountain or sink beneath the sea.Nether, will get me closer, nor bring my heart to thee.". Definitely one of my favorites.

[Coffee Vampier]

"I yearn, I want, but if you don’t, those feelings could never be the same."
such hard terms to grip... its heartbreaking...

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

REALLY AMAZING.

[Denise]

very beautiful and timeless

[SpokenWord]

What I enjoyed about this write was the meaning I am taking away from it. Many people chase a wish and climb that mountain or sinker deeper than any sea and they never find their wish for love. In knowing this the character here accepts a true love over chasing that wishful thought but still keeps the thought in mind. Perfect.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful write.

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

you seem to be very philosophical but into self which is good/ love all the work/ great poets feel hard and see around clearly/ of course we have other great poets with different qualities/ but anyway love it all

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow of this poem is very smooth. Your poetry is coming along nicely. This is a heart felt piece with emotion poured into every line that tells as story of a love that is lost but still is deeply embedded in your heart. Great work on this poem.

[Morning Star]

Wow So much said from the cord of your heart
I must tell you i love the tone and the flow in this beautiful
Emotional piece!
I love your writings
Keep up that beautiful flow!!
Wishing You Peace Love