You're Beautiful

A sight for my eyes

You’re beautiful

 

I’ll never find a word to describe

Nor explain the emotion I felt

When I first saw you

And even now

My heart skips a beat

With the thought

Of you

Running through

All the time

In side of my mind

Only you

Everyday when I see you

I search for those words

That defines

These heartfelt feelings

I have for you

Still

I’m at a lost

On how to say

You’re beautiful.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

Author's Note

Something I put together for a girl I just met.

Reviews

[tender2dtouch]

You just surprised me; I thought this poem was about your past love. I just now read it was for a girl you just met. Lucky girl! Nice to know you fell in love once again. Something I didn't think was possible in the midst of heartbreak.

Great poem and nice work!

Good luck with your new love . . .

[Elizabeth]

I think any girl who reads this will adore it. So very sweet :) I wish you luck with her

[MissWordSmith]

this was .... B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.
I loved the structure.. how one stanza just connected with the next.
the emotions were so raw and open, for everyone to see, and believe what you were trying to say.
and the end.. that was just perfect.
all in all, i really loved this. REALLY.. i think its my favorite of yours so far.
keep up the good work!

[Art Sun]

Your thoughts are as simple and as expressive as one needs to know how you feel...to seek to reach and touch another or someone who holds your eye is to feel alive, to be close to love, and to wish for more...

nice work Mauricio wish you well in your new friendship...