You're Beautiful

A sight for my eyes

You’re beautiful

 

I’ll never find a word to describe

Nor explain the emotion I felt

When I first saw you

And even now

My heart skips a beat

With the thought

Of you

Running through

All the time

In side of my mind

Only you

Everyday when I see you

I search for those words

That defines

These heartfelt feelings

I have for you

Still

I’m at a lost

On how to say

You’re beautiful.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

Author's Note

Something I put together for a girl I just met.

Reviews

[tender2dtouch]

You just surprised me; I thought this poem was about your past love. I just now read it was for a girl you just met. Lucky girl! Nice to know you fell in love once again. Something I didn't think was possible in the midst of heartbreak.

Great poem and nice work!

Good luck with your new love . . .

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a heartfelt piece that in my mind every woman would love to hear. Sometimes we are at a loss to describe our emotions and the beauty we see in others. the flow of this poem is done very nicely and all your thoughts are projected clearly. You poems are making leaps and bounds. each one I read gets better and better. Keep up the magical work.

[John Waits]

Simply and well put. Just goes to show that big, elaborate, artsy words are not the only or best way to define feelings. Refreshing.

[Taylor H.]

I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, this is beautiful

[Emily]

Very nice piece. I hope she realizes that she is a beautiful person who instills these thoughts into someone.

[floarealbastra10]

Nice poem, I like it.

[Samuel Dickens]

One never forgets this kind of special feeling. Call it infatuation, call it love, but whatever you call it, it's powerful stuff.

[Marie Harrison]

No words can describe such a powerful love for this beauty you find when you gaze at her. What a love poem.

[KatiePie]

It's so simple, yet it tells such a beautfiu sotry, I really love it :)
Great write! Keep writing!
-Cathrine

[ShaneBerry]

Simple like Art Sun said, and very strong! i bet you would sweep that girl off her feet with this one!!! :-}>

[Angel Veselinov]

Very well written poem. Nice use of words for describing those emotions you felt when you saw that girl. Great imagination

My heart skips a beat

With the thought

Of you

This is the line i really loved. Thanks for sharing :)