Frame Of Mind

inturnal frame work

 

 

Frame Of Mind

I need to mend the fences to contain what's in my yard.

While the house remains the same.

I’ve taken time to ponder this thought,

Because they say,

What’s outside may reflect the very feelings that I frame.

Since the latter task has divided the structure

As to,

Compromise the very foundation for which it stands.

 I must start from the ground up and clear the yard.

In hopes that the fences will support what remains.

By   Mauricio   Montoya

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jennifer Lee]

I like this. Philosophical and evocative. Well done.

[J.Black]

"In hopes that the fences will support what remains."

Amazing! Metaphorically speaking throughout this entire piece!!!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Very, very nice. It's deep and interesting, flows BEAUTIFULLY.
Perfect. :)

[Art Sun]

Clearly a combined or mixed thought that can be seen two ways...the literal realty or the metaphor of illusion...it is how life or situations are comprehended by each and every individual...

don't we all put up or mend those fences of ours...

nice work...Mauricio

[Jacqueline Lopez]

I LIKE HOW YOU USE YOUR METAPHORS IN ORDER TO GET YOUR POINT ACROSS. I LIKE IT!

[Manda]

i really liked this piece! well done