Frame Of Mind

inturnal frame work

 

 

Frame Of Mind

I need to mend the fences to contain what's in my yard.

While the house remains the same.

I’ve taken time to ponder this thought,

Because they say,

What’s outside may reflect the very feelings that I frame.

Since the latter task has divided the structure

As to,

Compromise the very foundation for which it stands.

 I must start from the ground up and clear the yard.

In hopes that the fences will support what remains.

By   Mauricio   Montoya

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Now this write shows intense soul searching and finding the meaning in it

[Bette]

wonderful write here and so true.

[Bodhisattva]

Very meaningful very beautiful and is writen in an interesting way that I love it. Is very deep and love the woryou used here awesome job!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the metaphor used in this poem. Mending fences and clearing the yard can fit so many aspects of our lives. We must take a deeper look in order to become better people or different people. This is a great poem expressing just this.

[Shante Payne]

You speak words of truth! I can relate to your poem like no other. Great job.

[Mindona Kanvas]

ah, a short poem with an immense amount of meaning. i enjoyed this.

[Buddhistboy73]

Interesting write.....I like the use of a house in this to describe feelings/internal revolution...like the line..."while the house remains the same".
Good write....

[Marie Harrison]

I can certainly relate to this poem. I really enjoyed the message and the read. It's packed with a lot of wisdom and vivid imagery and symbolism. Great piece!

[Angel Veselinov]

Great read :) A lot of tough in to it :) good job thanks for sharing

[Arctic Fox]

unique, original, and note worthy.