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         Writers 
  
 I’m a writer’ you’re a writer.
 In a world of chaotic words.
 The pen they say is mightier than the sword.
 Therefore acute is what we display.
 As our letters reach the page.
 Then time will tell what we relay.
 When our feelings of written rage.
 Give wisdom and understanding.

That comes, only with age.
                             

                            By Mauricio Montoya

Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Me gusto mocho! Very well done. i like the age/wisdom thing...I'll get the second part of that someday.

[Tasha]

You expressed your feelings well. Great job, I liked it a lot.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

It is wonderful to be able to write your feelings down , and you exspressed that very well in your poem!!

[Ron]

This feels like being shot with a scatter gun of words. All pellets are stinging and being able to sense the pellet spread pattern from the pains. It reads as a block rathers than through its stanzas. This is an irate Maurico who seems to back experience and age related wisdom in this work. As usual entertaining work from a mercurial writer.

[YouoweYoupay]

Writing is art. And being a good, gifted writer is a wonderful blessing. I like this poem because everyline with all its rhyme and beautiful simlicity is true. Thank you for sharing.

[Tate Morgan]

OA good look at the mind when it wont cooperate

[Marie Harrison]

What poetric wisdom Mauricio! I loved your poem. I enjoyed the rhyme and the message.

[J.Black]

Another writers block poem? C'mon! I know its in you to write about something that inspires you! Sometimes with writers block though, you can write about non sense and create a really awesome piece out of it!

[Ourebro.]

I like the tone of this, it's familiar and tender.
I like it.
Il like the last lines the most, and how they're hopeful and understanding, and how i think you're trying to say how our writing, even hen we do have writer's block, sometimes become great works, becoming most memorable over time. Give wisdom and understanding./ That comes only with age.
You know, my favorite thing to do when i have writer's block is write a poem about having writer's block or a poem about writer's block itself.
Very inspirational, nice write.
10/10.