Oh Tamara

Oh Tamara

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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My sister a letter for her

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Oh Tamara I forget when we we're just kids
Oh Tammy we.we're just Catholic
When we went to the same school
A street call kissaling.
In 1969 we we're in the old country
I don't remember we we're there
Oh Tammy how could I forget
Yet I don't recall yet you still love me
One day as kids our path cross again
Homeless a day to be remembered
Only to be forgotten for years
Until dad had slept never to return
Oh Tamara how could tragedy
Bring us back together again
Yet you still love me
But now with conditions
Because I forgot you
When we we're kids.

© 2024 Mauricio Montoya


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Love should never have conditions…..but there are events or circumstances that blind us and make us forget what bonds us together in the first place….and sometimes we forget why we separate….perhaps silly reason…traded however can re-new the bond….lovely Mauricio
Warmly
B🌷

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

4 Months Ago

Betty its a long story and now we're old, condition because we're not kids,lol only at heart, thanks.. read more
Betty Hermelee

4 Months Ago

you are very welcome!
warmly, B



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this reminded me of my best friend from school. we were inseperable, but circumstances drove me to a different continent. then, this year i paid him a visit. it had been ten years! we sat in the games room and talked all night, the rest of the week we just watched old movies and chilled out. and i remember thinking, this is the happiest i've been in a very long time.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mauricio Montoya

1 Month Ago

Thank you for sharing
Sisters huh?..Got two myself...hahaha. Yeah, the greatest of weaves we love without condition but not always like, such is the heart of age and life, and yet such a wonderful thing to even have a sister. Enjoyed your recollection and sharing. Telling her you realize that she loves you still is a wonderful jester but writing her poetry hopefully breaks the thicker ice. I hope she reads it well and all continues as it should. Thank you for sharing~

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mauricio Montoya

3 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, family is a tough nut to crack, most people you'd slap in famil.. read more
A love that lasts through misty memories but a trust that is shaken and requires proof. Lovely

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

4 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing. Thoughts.
Fantastic work. Ahh. memories.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

4 Months Ago

Thank you, yes memories
Love should never have conditions…..but there are events or circumstances that blind us and make us forget what bonds us together in the first place….and sometimes we forget why we separate….perhaps silly reason…traded however can re-new the bond….lovely Mauricio
Warmly
B🌷

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

4 Months Ago

Betty its a long story and now we're old, condition because we're not kids,lol only at heart, thanks.. read more
Betty Hermelee

4 Months Ago

you are very welcome!
warmly, B
dear Mauricio… the tender years still remain in our 💜 Heart and we become a part of the Music 🎶 where Violins play memories. Softly, Pat

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

4 Months Ago

Love you the same, thank you for sharing your thoughts
Intense emotional and feelings towards Tamara expressed in beautiful way. Loved this poem. It's deep and colourful

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

4 Months Ago

Oh thank you very much for sharing your thoughts may all be semi with you.
Such a touching letter. If only those conditions were erased. Nicely expressed Mauricio. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

4 Months Ago

Thank you Chris, I hope all is well

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Added on August 21, 2024
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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