I wonder

I wonder

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya

I wonder if its just shades of gray
Or maybe, just black and white
How can a king give his Thorne
To a court jester just laughs
But never sheds a tear
As we surrounded by tyranny
Father sky how can we pray
If its means the end
I wonder if we can accept what happens
To those of us who believe
We wonder in faith
Is there hope.
We pray
you'll Save us.
Without wondering.

© 2024 Mauricio Montoya


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everything will be alright if we knew there is no heaven or hell. but there is certainly right and wrong, and for that we must stand for. and we pray for strength. salvation will come not fromy prayer but from the strength we gain from it. or, i might be wrong. as the title says, 'i wonder...'

Posted 1 Week Ago


Excellent writing. It's an awesome piece in relationship with sociological thought.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

3 Months Ago

Well ur not to bad yourself, thank you for sharing to make us better writers. Take care
Arundass TP

3 Months Ago

Welcome friend 😊
When I read this poem I thought of government or leadership. Compare to the African leadership...politicians are our court jesters.

Your poem relates to me in deep level. For we are surrounded by tyranny, Father sky how can we pray...?

Thank you for writing this. Somewhere in the world, your writing is someone's voice. Keep writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


When I read this poem I thought of government or leadership. Compare to the African leadership...politicians are our court jesters.

Your poem relates to me in deep level. For we are surrounded by tyranny, Father sky how can we pray...?

Thank you for writing this. Somewhere in the world, your writing is someone's voice. Keep writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mauricio Montoya

3 Months Ago

Yes is us people and the politicians who.plays while we're surrounded by war. Thank you for sharing .. read more

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Added on August 8, 2024
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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