Cave Within.

Breaking a shell

I just.wanted to leave my cave
And stroll down memory lane
But this time today so I won't forget.
Wow I've slept, because things,
Have changed, wake up!
So a drink and cop a bench
So I crack a beer
When their gaze caught my eye
Have a nice and I lit a cigarette

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it's an interesting piece tat begins with a desire that is more or less impossible to fulfil. some people are just trapped, and don't i know it. and so the persona copes with this hell like a real man: beer and smokes. it is a striking vignette of someone deep in trouble and a work i certainly relate to.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts

[Thomas W Case]

You capture the scene very well here.

[Betty Hermelee]

Your mood definitely changed for the better; you broke the ice, so to speak….changed you attitude and decided to do something fun for yourself.
Even it was drinking and smoking …… your mood was enlightened..l.
Nice write Mauricio
Warmly, B

[Mauricio Montoya]

Betty just something that came to mind but thank you for reading and I enjoy your thoughts.

[Betty Hermelee]

Always a pleasure!
Warmly, B