Cave Within.

Cave Within.

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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Breaking a shell

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I just.wanted to leave my cave
And stroll down memory lane
But this time today so I won't forget.
Wow I've slept, because things,
Have changed, wake up!
So a drink and cop a bench
So I crack a beer
When their gaze caught my eye
Have a nice and I lit a cigarette

© 2024 Mauricio Montoya


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You capture the scene very well here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Your mood definitely changed for the better; you broke the ice, so to speak….changed you attitude and decided to do something fun for yourself.
Even it was drinking and smoking …… your mood was enlightened..l.
Nice write Mauricio
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mauricio Montoya

3 Months Ago

Betty just something that came to mind but thank you for reading and I enjoy your thoughts.
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

Always a pleasure!
Warmly, B

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Added on May 21, 2024
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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