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I forgot to give you a card
One you never gave me
Sorry I could not remember
Shame on me.
When you thought of me.
To say,
Happy birthday.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Very sad and discomforting episodes in life. Courage and love is the key. Very sad. Though late I read this all blessings for successful life from my part.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Hey thanks not sad mom's and we don't talk.by family passes the word ten.or more years. Me and.mom don't well we don't even text. But one I tell my sister for her birthday ill send her a card, I forgot so I wrote the poem.

[Arundass TP]

Ho... Ok friend...Life is always contrasting situations.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah thanks

[Chris Shaw]

I felt the sadness here Mauricio. Not everyone has an easy relationship with parents. You might have forgotten the card but you wrote the poem. You were thinking of her. More than she afforded you dear poet.

Chris

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow Chris, yeah it tough but with age comes understanding and realizing I'm no Saint but one day I'm my day I thought about hers which I forgot, thanks for your input and sharing your thoughts have a great day.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome. Have a good day yourself.

[Poetic Beauty]

Being the bigger person isn’t always easy but inside it typically makes us feel better that we at least tried even if forgotten and it is a belated birthday wish

[Mauricio Montoya]

It is what its but in the we will miss our family but most of all no matter what, moms

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

That is the truth

[Mauricio Montoya]

Sorry I !left some words out, lol but ur right you understand. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[John the Baptist]

Sounds like a mea culpa. At least you admit it and want to make amends.

[Mauricio Montoya]

No we haven't spoke in years but one day it dawn on me it was her birthday so I wrote this poem

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah it does have two meanings, mom and me haven't talk in years but on her birthday I was drunk and forgot about send a card via my sister so I wrote this poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Betty Hermelee]

A very poignant piece….says a lot, but we all make mistakes, unless this was not…. Might be intentional…many ways to view this….
Nice write Mauricio!
Warmly, B

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Its been awhile since I've seen her, again thank you for dropping by

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome!
Warmly, B