How do we find word's
Is it from the sky
Or just word's we have deep inside
Pain that we voice lost
In a simple sentence
Its the stanza, unfold
Hard to understand
But the foreground
As word stand ground
Because as writer's
We are bound
Not lost but found
The word is the word
Hope you find it
Because will write it.
lol.
One never knows where inspiration will come from. But when it hits the words come.
A suggestion, drop all the apostrophes you've used. Perhaps they were typos.
Also, and this is just my opinion, but ending a poem with "lol" cheapens any credibility the poem has. That is of course my opinion only.
Posted 6 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Months Ago
Wow, love it, thank you for sharing your opinion and thoughts. Lol.
Inspiration comes from deep within us, I feel. It comes from what we experience in life, from our thoughts, from our feelings. Words flow when we are inspired and every poet/poetess has a very special and unique gift to craft those words into beautiful poetry. You are extremely blessed because you can also draw and your Profile Pic is simply wonderful. You have a wonderful gift for writing also and I, thank you for sharing this inspiring poem with us today. I like it very much and I also like the catchy title which drew me in to read it. Wishing you a very nice day filled with inspiration to write some more poetry, Mauricio...
Yeah I believe we as writers share thought that makes us better not as one but as a group
2 Months Ago
Thank you for your kind words, Mauricio. Poems are composed of words which come from feelings, from .. read moreThank you for your kind words, Mauricio. Poems are composed of words which come from feelings, from thoughts, from experiences we have in life and what we write is a result of many different things. Each person experiences these things in their own unique way and that is what makes our poetry different and distinctive as individuals. Thank you for sharing, Mauricio...
2 Months Ago
Thank you writing I love this site because can read many works again thank you for sharing .
Words are the essence of poetics
Some folks seem to have the gift of using them more effectively than others, however playing with words is an enjoyable undertaking whether done seriously or not
Cheers
Posted 6 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Months Ago
Yeah love your input, lol. Bringing them together is poetic fun
One never knows where inspiration will come from. But when it hits the words come.
A suggestion, drop all the apostrophes you've used. Perhaps they were typos.
Also, and this is just my opinion, but ending a poem with "lol" cheapens any credibility the poem has. That is of course my opinion only.
Posted 6 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Months Ago
Wow, love it, thank you for sharing your opinion and thoughts. Lol.