women

women

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya

everything we think of women the Bible brings them down
even our strength makes us super without a thought
we think we run the world without regret
with women we conquest
but were lost if we don't see them
because they are life 
without them
were nothing.

© 2023 Mauricio Montoya


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Yes, I agree! Women rule the world... not being sexist... but if there were no women around.... we would not populate and everything would go awry....women have the wherewith all to create...
Thank you!!!
Warmly, B

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you dear friend for valuing the true worth of women. Behind every great man is a great woman. Hope you are keeping well.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Daz
Women make the world go round. Nicely penned.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

thank you I agree.
How very true this is, altho' the Taliban and a few others don't really seem to buy into this particular concept.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

its sad in many culture women are not first but that is religion but what god bo we believe in. than.. read more
Much truth lies within the lines you
have written..nicely defined lines
in an interesting Format also....
....Well crafted ..& conveyed my friend

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

Fran thank you ive read your work so I'm grateful for your thoughts.
A truth revealed through this poem. Good work 👍

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

thank you for dropping by, women are everything

I'm not sure I should be reading this since I arrived here by default .. but the last couple of lines are spot on .. without them we are nothing .. so I shall give you full marks regardless. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

thank you anyway.
Neville

1 Year Ago


....... 😎👍

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Added on October 11, 2023
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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