God

God

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
"

does he exist.

"
god is it something that brings hope
but we wonder if its true
if with all war can be brought to saved us
does god exist
with war of animation
can we live 
without a solution
from something greater than ourselves
were on the brink of dying
if we don't understand 
that our demise is nil ending of what we love
so we need a god
some good 
to save us
from what will regret.

© 2023 Mauricio Montoya


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Great work The big question ⁉️ mark
We have a choice to either to do good or bad .
Free will .
We aren't God's robots

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

no but you are free, thank you for sharing
Beautiful and powerful writing. Good work 👍

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

no you write and be better. because we write so you will write you're thoughts better so we can read.. read more

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Added on October 11, 2023
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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