Lazy

Crazy
Out to lunch
Bite me
Before you leave.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You made me smile. I worked retail manager for Walmart and Mejier for 22 years. I understand your statement Mauricio. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

It's about a girl who is a lawyer we've been friends she is a good lawyer she won cases but sometimes I would not agree so she would say ur out to lunch but we would win on my advice, so I told her, I told you so her comment was Bite me, she has left but before she left to say goodbye, I wrote her this. We're still friends and she laughed when read.
It's a short piece but thank you for sharing your thoughts, it means a lot when you read and reply.
Again thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Mauricio.

[Pete]

a hard-hitting, biting write. even being lazy takes effort ... :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you, sometimes we're all lazy.

[Neville]

a tasty little gem if ever there was .. Neville :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

Crazy as a corn on the cob on a winter's day. Lovely short poem. Looking forward to more.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Need to read yours

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thanks Mauri, see you then!

[light and ashes]

Maybe a vampire wants a quick and easy meal?
I don't know lol
I am a weirdo, and a little too imaginative.
I enjoyed the read.

[Mauricio Montoya]

You're funny,lol but it was meant for a girl who loves me but can't stay but love's me but has to go , but will love me in heart. but in love bite me. You're a good poet. I love how you saw it after all blood is in the heart. You're not weird just down to earth. Thank you for sharing

[light and ashes]

You are kind, poet, thank you.

[Mauricio Montoya]

No remember we all right but what is right, you read, thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Stella Armour]

she might well savour your delights with a bite ....

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow how did you know it was girl. Thank you for reading and sharing.

[Chris Shaw]

Well we can certainly bite with a few words if we want to. Economy of words is quite a gift Mauricio. Have a good lunch and take a lazy break afterwards. Happy Friday. My mind wandered when responding here. It often does


Chris

[Mauricio Montoya]

I meant it to people who throw words I'm lazy to comment yes ur right it our words that defines the outcome.
Thank you