WHY

Haves and have not

Many don't care but few wonder.
Why the haze between my eyes
That i put, makes me not see ahead
I've ponder why I'm blind to those I hate
Not taking heed as angles sing.
To the silent cries of those who care
Never once heard that I once saw.
It's why I lost hope in what was never mined
And you wonder why.

Author's Note

Just wrote it from my phone needs work but I had to write it while it was fresh in my mind

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A sublime muse here but it must be hard to be blind to those who hate. Kudos for the poem!

Plz also check out my two newest poems and then pleez comment on one of these two poems that you prefer. Thanks

[Fran Marie]

There will always the haves
and the have nots that's
just the way it is .the most
important thing is to be true
to ourselves and love those
within our circle..and not
hate the others..i like
the w a y you wrote this one

Nice work

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you Fran

[Betty Hermelee]

You're doing very well, always write down your thoughts.... Hate is a strong word, and something must be troubling you to express this; I take it you are blind to those who care about you... this happens in life, but one must try to make the hate disappear and accept the the love from those who give. it usually turns out better.
Thank you for sharing.
Best, Betty

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!

[Aura]

"I've ponder why I'm blind to those I hate
Not taking heed as angles sing.
To the silent cries of those who care" We pay no attention to those we hate, but it seems we pay little attention to those who care most about us.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes sad but true thank you for sharing you thoughts and most of all for reading.

[Aura]

My pleasure :)

[Patricia Wedel]

I wonder why the Sky is reflected in your Eyes... or
why Birds know more than meets the Eye... Some day
I will fly where Angels Cry. softly, Pat

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks for the insight have a blessed day and night for that matter

[Coyote Poetry]

Mauricio. The why questions? Like the poem. I have no concern. We can do our best and we go forward my friend. Leave the naysayers behind us. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you my brother in write and spirit we never have concern only what's right. Always glad you visited and gave your thoughts. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.