Outside the box

Lock in a box
Can we see outside
Wondering if I see
Inside
Blinded by the hell.
Which is outside
All Around
Will I ever see
Or
Think outside the box.
Will never know
Until the end

Author's Note

Woke up in the middle and the night, all these dreams made me write this. Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I got a real feeling of claustrophobia here as well as chaos and fear. Nightmares can do that to you. Can give you a taste of hell. Thank you Mauricio. All the best.

Chris

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks for dropping by, yes it's a nightmare but couldn't there be a message. Thanks for reading, I hope all is well and have a 👍 day.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Sorry for the typo, I meant, could, sender everything via phone, lol that can be a night.

[Kerra]

So very well written and said

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks, I had these dreams, you know those ones where you're running in circles. Thank you for reading and your comments.

[Fran Marie]

Some dreams can be so confusing
and frightening ...everything seems
to get scrambled ..you expressed
this so deeply in this well crafted
poem....nice work

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thanks Fran yeah dreams can be scary but there's always a message,.glad you could drop by.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This is such a haunting poem Mauricio, I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah for me it was a dream, thanks for reading and your comment 😊