My Child

Sweet child of time

Never forsaken always thine

Therefore keep strong the mind

In these sign of times

And shed those tears

For I give you water to cry

As your sorrow makes me dry

Fear not the gleam of my pride.

Because I put what you have inside.

Author's Note

just something that came to mind

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

giving important words to yourself and perhaps your child to keep strong through time, which always changes...I made you this way, so you will continue your strength throughout time....
Lovely,
Warmly, B

[Mauricio Montoya]

Betty thanks for dropping by but in this write I'm the child and in my imagination God is speaking to me. I always appreciate your feedback.

[emmajoygreen]

What came to mind is absolute love plus a determined need to protect your precious child. What a heart-felt mix of words, Mauricio. Keep well and safe, sir.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Hi Emma wow you've touch a nerve, well there two poems I've written one a letter to god, lol don't get me wrong but the next day I wanted god to be true so I wrote his or her answer. Lol ,thanks ill be safe but I hope God exists.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Father in the sky, that's the first letter

[Poetic Beauty]

Keeping your mind strong and thinking for yourself is very important always.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you PB for dropping by and sharing your thoughts.

[Fran Marie]

A lovely piece and much
wisdom within this short
piece ..especially in these
dreadful days of woe..

Nicely penned poem

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you Fran

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A wonderful poem, Mauricio, thank you for sharing your art in words with us.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts because we're all in this together.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Yes we are my friend I agree, thank you