GIN

GIN

if were talking a drink,

its cunny and baffling,

but unique. 

this is something,

you'd admire slowly, 

before it takes affect.

never ever underestimate,

it power or beauty,

because it could be,

the name of a girl,

that fits that same description.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

My mother's name was Virginia & they called her "GIN" as a kid. She was probably this kind of a drink, now that you mention it. Shy, reserved, wallflower . . . but once she got her claws into a situation, watch out! Love this play on the word "gin"! (((HUGS)))

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yeah she's was one who enjoyed her drink and carried her the same way without regret. I guess 👍 your mom some people can handle life as they see in,thank you for sharing food for thought.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Mauricio! :)
I wonder how she'd taste with tonic water and lime juice. Haha
This was a dun read. Thanks for sharing.

[Mauricio Montoya]

lol, thank you for reading and your input.

[Chris Shaw]

Things slowly sipped are appreciated more. Whether this is a drink or a lover, the effect can be the same. I love a gin and tonic every now and then, add ice and a slice of lemon and you have perfection in a glass. Enjoyed the read Mauricio.

Chris

[Mauricio Montoya]

never cared for gin the drink but with those recipes i may try it, this poem it about a girl i met while staying at a motel we be came friends later and when she told her name i later decided to write this poem thank you Chris i enjoy your input

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you, my pleasure.

[Poetic Beauty]

This must be coming from a lover of Gin I however do not like the taste of pine needles lol everyone has that drink that suits them mine is a bit darker, wild and a soothing burn ahh mine would be whiskey

[Mauricio Montoya]

hi PB she is a drinker but not of gin that was her name, thanks for your input

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. It was a good write

[Fran Marie]

I like the comparison
the name of a girl
and drink fitting
the same description

if gin doesn't quite
work work out
there's always the
margarita. to write
about ..

Nice Work;

[Mauricio Montoya]

she just a friend but a margarita sounds good. lol Thank you

[emmajoy]

You've always found a name or two for themes, Mauricio! Wasn't there one called Linda some years ago, who also twirled your head! Many thanks for your review.. take care, keep safe. :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

you remember that one linda but the frist one i wrote her was; your beautiful, Linda was latter, she was plane yet she radiated beauty and the way she carried herself lit up the room and her name was Gin. Thank you Emma have a great day

[emmajoy]

Aha, she reads to have been very special! Take care, sir, keep safe..

[Coyote Poetry]

When I was young. I did like the gin. I am old and almost gray. I like the whiskey now. I liked the tale shared Mauricio. Hello from Michigan and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

thank my friend i wrote for a girl name Gin

[Coyote Poetry]

A girl name Gin. You are welcome my friend.