with everything happening and people are reacting, makes me wonder i've been homeless for many years thank god i have a home but when i was apart from good and bad i could see the beauty the world has to offer most of the time i was walking down the street, lol. thank you for reading.
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My friend. This is poetry.
"Yet we believe,
in birds and bees,
milk and honey.
love and hate
that leads to war
live or die
life no more"
The above lines. We learn and understand. Life is a steady teacher. We do learn to appreciate the simple things. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
coyote I'm always thinking something is missing in every write i do, i took time went though a few d.. read morecoyote I'm always thinking something is missing in every write i do, i took time went though a few drafts .thank you for your thoughts, kind words and for reading its you pick those last lines that was thepart were i would get stuck.lol
I've got constant all-over pain & it would be easy to fall into a pit of self-pity, complaining all the time at how s****y it feels to be in this body. But I make it a point to rise to the occasion of living, which is so well stated & encouraged in your poem! I love how you put it in simple everyday terms of what the joy of living looks like . . . no need to wait for some big splash . . . sometimes it's the small hardly-noticable stuff that makes life worth showing up for. I love this message! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
hey Margie it always good to hear form you many thank you because beauty of poetry is in the eyes o.. read morehey Margie it always good to hear form you many thank you because beauty of poetry is in the eyes of the reader.
My friend. This is poetry.
"Yet we believe,
in birds and bees,
milk and honey.
love and hate
that leads to war
live or die
life no more"
The above lines. We learn and understand. Life is a steady teacher. We do learn to appreciate the simple things. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
coyote I'm always thinking something is missing in every write i do, i took time went though a few d.. read morecoyote I'm always thinking something is missing in every write i do, i took time went though a few drafts .thank you for your thoughts, kind words and for reading its you pick those last lines that was thepart were i would get stuck.lol