our love from your eyes

just love

From birth 

They were honoring the dead.

born into a life of  love and hate

a relationship surly a doom

that could bring me down

to my demise,

until I saw your eyes

 with much regret

and to my surprise I realize.

that what I'm seeing 

I always had inside

how could a love so deep 

make me blind

and now i want to hide it.

but through your eyes,

I wonder can i believe,

A love so true.

if only you could show me

they say faith

is the blind walking

 where they cant see.

and hope is 

in the darkness 

you will see light.

but opposite attraction,

i want to hide love,

even walk away,

your love not only deep

but all around

if you're lost, you will be found

it radiates

and if you cant see it

definably 

you'll fell it.   

all that from your eyes

i shall rise and even cry 

because

from my  knee's

i stand

 from your eyes

i see love

because i want to believe

never blind with a doubt

a love given to me

i should sleeve and detract 

what i see

a love so strong

i want to forget

but I'm your hands 

a love that will,

carry me though

no break up,

for rich or poor

no matter

because love come from inside 

a love I saw from your eyes

I love you too.

Reviews

[Neville]

this is undoubtedly a love poem incorporating a plea .. and if I'm not mistaken a pledge or a promise .. I hope others will now visit and similarly enjoy .. Neville

[Mauricio Montoya]

brother I didnt know I wrote this butit does needs some work, thank you for bringing something out of the dust.

[Neville]

................... my pleasure entirely

[Mauricio Montoya]

well my friend thank you for the dusts to settle.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes the hardest thing is to live ourselves but we can see it in someone else’s eyes when we look, really gaze, into their eyes at just the right moment

[wordman]

if only we could see inside where the real beauty lives

[Mauricio Montoya]

we need love. thank you.

[wordman]

yes we do,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,