ever seen or ever saw

ever seen or ever saw

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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not understanding 
our love for humanity 
yet i yearn  to be one.
rejection 
has torn me apart.
all is fair 
in love and war
our demise, 
depart from life.
only makes me pull the knife.
and along you had the gun. 

© 2021 Mauricio Montoya


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At my late point in life (a ton of hurts at almost 65) I've just about had it with the BS that passes as social interactions, so I understand & relate to a message like this, strongly expressing a violent craving for relief from the clamoring madness (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

3 Years Ago

it what's happening now people running from death refuse to help rather you before them, but death i.. read more



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At my late point in life (a ton of hurts at almost 65) I've just about had it with the BS that passes as social interactions, so I understand & relate to a message like this, strongly expressing a violent craving for relief from the clamoring madness (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mauricio Montoya

3 Years Ago

it what's happening now people running from death refuse to help rather you before them, but death i.. read more
A lot of things can tare a person a part. This has a slightly haunting air to it. I enjoyed reading.

(write drunk and edit sober)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on March 3, 2021
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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