Crazy

going nuts

crazy

you're in love

cant give that away

crazy is

you won the lottery

and want to give it away

or

worsted you're now a monk

and still you want to give it away

more crazy 

if you strap a bomb

so you can be closer to god

but never be crazy

that you are alone

because it may sound crazy

But you are 

someone to love.

Author's Note

were all crazy at some point in our lives but lets show some love.

Reviews

[Sandi Scott]

What I understood of Your Poetry has to do with Love and Religion? From My Understanding and View Point is that People have a Love that May be Not what Others May Think. When You Say Crazy You Would Want to Give Money Away yet Ostracized for Loving "Your God in a Way" that Others Deem "Crazy" is in fact Judgement? My Question in which I Get from Reading Your Poetry is in Fact it is to Myself that You Talk of "Religion" and "Love" in which People are Willing to Die for a Love. My Only Wonder is In Fact if Your Poetry talks of What Others Understand of It May be Lacking? But it Does Portray to an Audience that Already Understands that. Maybe Lead More Into Outside Factors? HOWEVER BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you its whatever floats a boat

[barleygirl]

There are many ways to go crazy & you pick some interesting examples, examples separated by so much distance, I'm amazed at writers who can connect such disparate dots in verse, as you've done. Perhaps maturity is learning to make friends with our crazy streaks (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mauricio Montoya]

Margie ur right there's a lot of ways to lose it. lol, thank you.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The poem was interesting, but your note was golden and a bit funny. I enjoyed this read. People who win the lottery gives the money away for what they buy and all the times they lost. :) tyfs

[Mauricio Montoya]

yeah its funny but it shouldn't be hard to show some love, thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

I would keep the money and I would move to the coast of South America. Bombs upon the body. I don't know if God would understand. A crazy world my friend. I agree with your author's note. Love, concern and kindness. Try to be nice to each other. Thank you Mauricio for sharing the interesting poetry. My grandfather told me often. More nuts than sane people in our world. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

thank you it is a wonder what keep us sane. but right now we cant move nowhere. lol

[Coyote Poetry]

Won't be long. If the USA don't open up completely. Phrase three in Europe. Deadly. I need a long vacation to anywhere. You are welcome my friend.

[Sandi Scott]

My Apologies it May Seem I was More Critical in Accident I was Writing "Outloud" While Thinking Upon Your Poetry!